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My warm breathe steaming in the winter air,
Snow on the trees matches your skin so fair.
Locked in your longing intense gaze,
It pulls me from the cloudy haze.
Here in the quiet somber winter glow,
The deepest feelings begin to grow.
But somehow my heart becomes distant and cold,
From a love that I could barely hold.
Somehow I can't trust this warm feeling misplaced in mid-winter.
Something unfamiliar from seasons never changing.
Like a cold wind on my skin caressing,
Through these fortress walls I was building.
How my spirit longs to soar with you into the open sky so blue!
But landlocked here on broken wings I'm left just watching you.
Is this how we are destined to be?
Caged apart yet completely free.
So cold, in an eternal winter so lonely.
But a warmth when winds change, if only permanently.
Rid me of this winter that's been in my heart for an eternity.
A collab between me and ~7evid, who I wrote [link] with. That I wrote [link] about.

I had more to do with this one...we alternated lines. First line was mine, second his...so on so forth.
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HovmanJakob Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Here is something...
what if you split it into your two verses...?!
I realy like it that way...more energy...
But...this is just a play...
can I tell them...?
will they play...?
I will...Jakob.
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xxHarmoniousChaosxx Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Professional Writer
we're two people speaking as one person...I think the cohesive factor is better as one solid verse.
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